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Post by darkenedstar on Sept 4, 2007 10:00:42 GMT -5
Such gastly incisions of unknown origin burning as I walk near such an unholy land, where demons sit and ghosts walk, where the trees dance and eat the flesh of the air, where a lone girl sits along the fence; I stare and become intranced walking ever closer. suddenly darkness [falls] to the earth and incisions burn with unattainable hurt and pain becomes crimson. the girl smiles and stands to her feet. she speaks with such unknown tounge and I in return speak the unknown. with [anger] in her eyes she forms to something so undiscribable. It spews such violence from it's mouth as I stand and smile as it screams at me, and when it is done I speak the unknown. slowly it forms to it's gentalish state, incisions flowing with blood but pain unheard of, she smiles and vanishes as dust in the wind. I faint to life or reality with only scars remaining, unable to tell if the journey was real or a dream.
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Post by Major Havok on Sept 9, 2007 15:51:14 GMT -5
[glow=blue,2,300] That ws really interesting... hmmmm... It made me want to write a fanfic. Lol. Very well done though. Theres somethig about the way you wrote it out however that made it less appealing... I'm not sure what but I'll try and sort that out [/glow]
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