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Kiss
Apr 10, 2007 8:59:07 GMT -5
Post by darkenedstar on Apr 10, 2007 8:59:07 GMT -5
I take the knife, and place it to my lips. I kiss it gently, then test with figures tips.
My finger opens, the time is right. You are the last I shall see tonight.
With my kiss, I touch my skin. Ignoring the fact this is a sin.
I grace my flesh, wishing it was you. And in this instant, my life is through.
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Kiss
Apr 12, 2007 14:03:04 GMT -5
Post by Koga on Apr 12, 2007 14:03:04 GMT -5
mm mice poem but dont like the fact of whats its about.
well eny way nice job on it star ;D
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Kiss
May 8, 2007 10:25:01 GMT -5
Post by -={Arthas}=- on May 8, 2007 10:25:01 GMT -5
W2G DS it was pretty good
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Kiss
May 8, 2007 11:25:22 GMT -5
Post by ~Misa Misa~ on May 8, 2007 11:25:22 GMT -5
very nice..i think...o.o..
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Kiss
Jun 9, 2007 22:51:44 GMT -5
Post by Major Havok on Jun 9, 2007 22:51:44 GMT -5
Very um... emoish. But i like it Good work
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Kiss
Jul 4, 2007 15:19:31 GMT -5
Post by darkenedstar on Jul 4, 2007 15:19:31 GMT -5
Just because it's about cutting doesn't make it emo XD But thanks for the comments
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Kiss
Sept 6, 2007 7:10:40 GMT -5
Post by Major Havok on Sept 6, 2007 7:10:40 GMT -5
[glow=blue,2,300]Well, cross my earlyer wordings... Sceneish more so... But its very lovely. In a sadistic way lol. Nice ryming and equil beatings....simply beautiful.[/glow]
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