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Post by darkchalice on Mar 11, 2007 17:26:09 GMT -5
Time it has been so cruel to me yet i have been able to take what it had , no matter what it handed me.
Life just seems so empty as i hold this pillow knowing you want ever be there anymore, oh how life is so meaningless.
You your just an empty shadow that i see in my dreams , you your just something i one had as a dream that turned into a sickening reality.
Words that never reach my ear that are meant for hope fade in the shadows of my mind as i let the darkness sink in and my life as you knew it dies , because all the love and trust is gone.
I walk away from you now as i let my life just grow dank and depressing as my soul turns to stone and me feelings die like a withering black rose.
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Post by Koga on Mar 12, 2007 9:29:22 GMT -5
hmmm very nice poem dark too
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Post by darkenedstar on Mar 31, 2007 18:26:58 GMT -5
Dark indead... I enjoyed it. I like the third stanza the best because It stands out the most to me. Keep up the good writing. ^_^
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